House of Tarot Cards
Review: John Michaels, a retired magician, is called upon as a consultant in a cold case recently reopened by the Virginia Beach police department in House of Tarot Cards, the second mystery in this series by Alfred M. Albers.
Detective Jeanie Roberts has been investigating the unsolved murder of a psychic that occurred some three years ago. Getting nowhere, she gets approval to seek an outside opinion and selects John who she had seen at one of his performances years ago. He agrees to help and quickly uncovers several key aspects of the case that had gone unnoticed by the police. And when it looks like a police insider may have been involved, either in the murder or a subsequent cover-up, he realizes this case may not be quite as cold as originally thought.
House of Tarot Cards is a mystery of missed opportunities, from the interesting (if unambitious) plot and the well-thought out (though poorly drawn) characters to the lifeless narrative and stilted dialog. Like many self-published books, it could have benefited from the services of a professional editor, tweaking here and there and vastly improving the overall reading experience. Many of the rules of Writing Fiction 101 are, if not outright broken, indifferently ignored. The most annoying here is having the characters constantly say the name of the person to whom they are speaking. [John suddenly grabbed Stella's arm, turned her around and pulled her close to him. "What's wrong, John?" Stella whispered. "Don't turn around, Stella."] To its credit, the book appears to have been adequately proofread as there are few obvious spelling, punctuation, syntax, or formatting errors commonly found in other self-published works.
The biggest missed opportunity, however, is not expanding on, or fully utilizing, John's former profession as a magician in his new role as amateur sleuth. There are brief glimpses where it comes into play (his powers of observation, his deductive reasoning, his diversions) but they are few and far between. They should have been center stage (as it were).
Despite some of the problems noted, House of Tarot Cards is overall a generally enjoyable mystery. The likeable characters and attractive setting will appeal to traditional / cozy fans who appreciate a storyline with minimal violence and no rough language.
Acknowledgment: Alfred M. Albers provided a copy of House of Tarot Cards for this review.
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Location(s) referenced in House of Tarot Cards: Virginia Beach, Virginia
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House of Tarot Cards by Alfred M. Albers — A John Michaels Mystery
Publisher: Infinity Publishing
Format: Trade Paperback
Publication Date: February 2009
List Price: $16.95