The
Black Tea Experiments
Non-Series
Ray Atkinson
American Book Publishing (Trade
Paperback)
ISBN-10: 1-58982-370-2 (1589823702)
ISBN-13: 978-1-58982-370-9 (9781589823709)
Publication Date: March, 2007
List Price: $18.00
Synopsis (from
the publisher): Logan Bauer, a brilliant college student, has a
promising future. However, when his girlfriend is accused of murdering
fellow student Brent Johnson, Logan must go on a quest to discover the
truth that will set her free. Logan's journey soon takes him to the
former Soviet Union and into the hands of the infamous Dr. Vladimir
Rostov, a former scientist who worked on several top-secret medical
projects during the Cold War, including the Black Tea Experiments, a
drug that would enhance the learning ability of children and ultimately
increase the intelligence level of future Soviet generations.
But everything isn't as it seems. The two worlds of the former Soviet
Union and the quaint college town of Crandon, Illinois, soon collide,
forcing Logan to uncover the pieces of Rostov's twenty-five-year-old
secret.
Review: Ray Atkinson coins the term "airplane novel" for his first mystery, The Black Tea Experiments,
a book long enough to provide suspense, action, crime and romance in a
story that can be completed during the length of a typical flight.
Terrific concept, but, at least in this first attempt, rather poorly
executed.
There's a fairly intriguing plot at the core of this book: a student at a university in Illinois
is found murdered but with an unusual physical feature: one of his
kidneys had been recently removed, the incision neatly and expertly
sewn together. A fellow student, Logan Bauer, finds himself drawn into
the case when an astronomical experiment he is conducting using a
telescope on the roof of his dorm accidentally captures the scene of
the murder when a spring breaks and the lens points downward instead of
skyward. Pursued by the killers for the images taken by the telescope,
Logan discovers he is merely a pawn in an international incident that
had its origins back in the Soviet Union during the Cold War.
The problems in The Black Tea Experiments
begin with the very first chapter. Every character, even a minor one,
is introduced with a backstory. For a book of less than
150 pages and a dozen or more characters, it's overwhelming.
Furthermore, these backstories seem intended to take the place of
character development, as if by knowing how the characters came to be
where they are today the reader can somehow infer something meaningful
about them. Finally, it's impossible to generate any real, sustained
suspense when the flow of the plot is constantly interrupted with yet
another backstory for yet another usually unnecessary character. This
is all the more unfortunate because the main story has a lot of
potential to be a terrific thriller.
The book is riddled with errors and inconsistencies that could have
been eliminated with a more critical eye towards editing. The director
of the Black Tea project ridicules the ignorance of the parents whose
children are the subject of the experiments, yet he includes his own
children in them. Logan travels west (instead of east) to go from
Illinois to Indiana. He goes through customs leaving (instead of
entering) the US. In any transplant, the time between extraction of the
organ from the donor and its placement in the recipient is critical,
yet here, days or maybe even weeks, it's not clear, go by between the
respective surgeries. This also contradicts a statement made in the
book that the surgery takes place in the US rather than Russia because
there wasn't time to get the kidney out of the country. And probably
worse of all, especially for a mystery, no explanation is ever given
why the kidney donor, the murder victim, was killed in the first place.
It's disturbing that Atkinson took the time to develop an interesting
plot, yet didn't seem to care enough about the details that are so
crucial to the success of a crime novel.
There is almost certainly a market for mysteries and thrillers that are
longer than a short story but shorter than a standard-length novel
("airplane novels" as it were). Unfortunately, The Black Tea Experiments isn't a very good example of one.
Special thanks to Spotlight Publicity for providing an ARC of The Black Tea Experiments for this review.
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Location(s) referenced: Illinois, Indiana, Louisiana, Russia.