Punishment and Sacrifice
Non-series
John Reid
Lulu.com (Trade Paperback)
ISBN-10: 1-4303-1440-0 (1430314400)
ISBN-13: 978-1-7303-1440-0 (9781730314400)
Publication Date: May 2007
List Price: $25.95
Synopsis (from the publisher): The children we abuse today could become the monsters of tomorrow. This is the story of child abuse and the nightmare it can create both in the present and the future. It parallels and distorts what is madness and what is sanity until the line becomes blurred beyond recognition. Dr. Jack Barker: respected psychologist, loving father, responsible neighbor, serial killer? Under his mask of sanity he is driven to commit his monstrous acts in a game of cat and mouse and justifies it all by the wrongs that are done to him in the present and were perpetrated on him in his childhood. Mike Swanson: broken recovering alcoholic police detective who has seen too many atrocities human beings can do to each other. Will he be able to stop the monster in this case or be consumed by his own demons from his past. When these two worlds collide in a cataclysmic explosion, the battle will not only be over who will survive but how to live with the nightmarish truth that ties each together in the bondage of the past.
Review: John Reid's debut novel, Punishment and Sacrifice, a lurid tale of good versus evil, is such a muddled mess that by the end of the book its core message is all but lost.
There are only two characters that get any real attention or
development in the book: Jack Barker, a psychologist specializing in
family practice who has a sideline of killing children that, under what
is purported to be flawed judicial system, have not sufficiently paid
for their crimes and then, for good measure, killing their parents as
well; and Mike Swanson, a detective who is a recovering alcoholic and
assigned to desk duty but gets involved investigating the crimes
committed by Jack Barker. There is no suspense generated by the flat
narrative, the crimes are told in such a dispassionate manner that they
hardly seem shocking, and the revelation that Barker and Swanson are
brothers is foreshadowed in the first few chapters.
Child abuse is an abhorrent crime and clearly Reid is trying to relate
a story illustrating the potential long-term consequences of abusing a
child. But the link between cause and effect is never cogently made,
and when Barker takes on an apprentice in Billy Winfield, a boy he
blackmails into working with him, the book descends into the absurd.
"Doctor Jack Barker had, in a sense (sic) created a monster in Billy
Winfield and soon the monster would destroy its creator for it's (sic)
own survival and future."
In addition to its subject matter, many readers are likely to be put off by how poorly written the book is. "Their" is used as the contraction for "they are", "your" for "you are", and, as evidenced in the above quoted passage, "it's" for "its" (and vice versa). Punctuation is haphazard, quotation marks are used incorrectly, and long strings of commas seem intended to substitute for ellipses. The occasional error can and should be overlooked, but there is scarcely a page in Punishment and Sacrifice without some obvious syntactic problem. It's hard to take an author seriously when they don't take their craft seriously.
Special thanks to John Reid for providing a copy of Punishment and Sacrifice for this review.
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